Kill Your Darlings

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I just had to cut this from the WIP and that makes me sad. But: pacing, pacing, pacing.

GRACE
You were shot, Mr. Donovan.

DONOVAN
Just Donovan.

GRACE
How’d that happen?

DONOVAN
A long time ago, the first Donovan set sail from Ireland and–

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